1.0-1.5 DEFINE:
1. Teather: a rope or
chain that’s prevents an animal to move.
2. Placid: calm
and peaceful
3. Gouge: a chisel like tool with a cylindrical blade.
4. Solemn: grave
5. Ogling: to look at
in a flirty way.
6. Asylum: a place where ill or people with needs go.
7. Queue: braided hair worn hanging behind
8. Impeccable: flawless, perfect
9. Sorcerers: evil, supernatural powers
10. Cobbled: to mend,
put back together
11. Smiting: to hit
hard
12. Linoleum: hard,
washable, floor covering
13. Foe: enemy or
opponent
14. Acolytes: somebody
following the celebration
15. Henchmen: Flunky,
criminal
16. Recrimination: accusation
in response to one from someone else
17. Insatiable: appetite or desire, impossible to satisfy
18. Threshold: Piece of wood or stone that you put under the
door
19. Bystanders: A
person who is present but not involved (passerby)
20. Insomniac: No
sleep
21. Cipralex: a drug used for depression
22. Fester: Unhealthy,
decay
23. Bureaucracy:
system of organization and administration
24. Concave: going
inward
25. Solicitor:
lawyer who addresses matters of law with clients
2.0
Pg. 91: In the mirror my green eyes were peaceful (placid).
Pg. 91: So I drilled (gouged) my thumb into the skin beneath my
lashes.
Pg. 9: This small plastic bag is
what I was holding in my hand when the detention officer told me to go and
stand in the tangled line (queue) for the telephone.
Pg. 9: One has to go through a very great number of charity boxes, you will understand, to put
together an outfit that is truly an (ensemble).
Pg. 21: My son and I lived with consequences- a houseful of celebrations
(acolytes), criminals (henchmen) and stooges, flirting with (ogling)
us from behind the sofa, cackling darkly in the thin gap beside the bookcase, and
generally bursting out at us willy-nilly.
Pg. 24: He gave the vicar a dead (solemn) thumbs up.
Pg. 13: You are like evilly powerful (sorcerers) and you gave
made your language as safe as money.
Pg. 18: The headline on the new page said: Ill (Asylum) Seekers
Eating Our Swans.
Pg. 19: I heard his chair scrape on the hard (linoleum) floor.
Pg. 24: The amputation was flawless (impeccable).
Pg. 168: Shock, then accusations (recrimination), and then two
years of Andrews deepening depression.
Pg. 170: Lawrence grinned, but then hesitated on the stop
(threshold).
Pg. 171: I think one of those innocent extra (bystanders) you see
in the back round of the comics.
Pg. 172: Andrew was wondering
around the house on his can’t-go-to-sleep (insomniac) nights.
Pg. 172: the only thing keeping
my husband going was six Amaretto biscuits and one tablet of anti-depressant
(Cipralex) a day.
Pg. 172: I’ve spent two years
denying what happened on that beach. Ignoring it, letting in infect
(fester).
Pg. 173: You’ll get dragged down by the government (bureaucracy),
and they’ll send her home away.
Pg. 175: The ramp (concave) of Lawrence’s back.
Pg. 176: I’ll need to find her a lawyer (solicitor), and start an
appeal procedure.
Pg. 81: I had been chained (teathered) to the detention center
for two years.
Pg. 23: I went to Nigeria in hope to mend (cobble) my marriage.
Pg. 21: If it wasn’t Mr. Freeze with his dastardly ice rays, the it was
the Penguin-Batman’s enemy (foe).
Pg. 169: His lips wobbled and his face went red
and he howled, abandoning himself utterly to grief in that way only infants and
super heroes have-that way that knows misery is bottomless and unsatisfying
(insatiable).
2.5
Negative/ harmful:
· Solemn
· Teather
· Asylum
· Sorcerers
· Smiting
· Foe
· Henchmen
· Recrimination
· Cipralex
· Fester
· Concave
Positive:
· Placid
· Ogling
· Impeccable
· Cobble
·
Having to do with the
law:
· Henchmen
· Recrimination
· Bureaucracy
· Solicitor
Tools
· Teather
· Placid
· Gouge
· Linoleum
· Threshold
Medical:
· Cipralex
· Fester
· Insomniac
Vanity/ Beauty:
· Ogling
· Queue
Amazon Book review: Ruff copy
Little Bee
This quarter we were assigned to read a non-fiction book. To honestly
say I wasn’t too happy. I tend to stay away from non-fiction. But to my
surprise I ended up really enjoying it. This book is anything from placid.
It’s about an African girl named Little Bee. She is driven out of her festering
country, by the sorcerers who control it. She makes a journey to the impeccable
country of England. Where she meets up with some old friends.
Surprisingly enough I did like this book. On a scale from one to ten I
would honestly give it a seven. Very
good life lessons are shown in this book. You can see how life can concave
from one second to another, it shows you how not to be a bystander in
life, to cobble a relationship, or too even make peace with your foe.
But the most important lesson of all is how to acolyte life to it’s
fullest, because you never know how much time you have left with the people you
love.
This book will leave you insomniac. You’ll be so teathered
to it; that you won’t want to put it down. I recommend this book for sixteen-year-old
kids and up. It’s a little overwhelming but its still an impeccable
book. The story line is queued together, so you really have to have
patience to understand it.
3.0
PARTNER: JULIANA LABORDE
1.0- check, all good
1.5- add more to your definitions. Don’t make them be just one word
2.0- fix punctuation, capitalization and spelling errors
2.5- perfect
3.0- try using transitional words to polish it up, I really liked your review you gave details but, you didn't give it
away, also you had a really good use of the words and the paragraphs flowed
nicely. You have some grammar mistakes but, over all your review is great.
Little Bee: IMPROVED
This quarter we were assigned to read a non-fiction book. To honestly
say I wasn’t too happy. I tend to stay away from non-fiction. However I really
ended up really enjoying it. This book is anything from placid. It’s
about an African girl named Little Bee. She is driven out of her festering
country, by the sorcerers who control it. She makes a journey to the impeccable
country of England. Where she meets up with some old friends.
Surprisingly enough I did like this book. On a scale from one to ten I
would honestly give it a seven. Yet, very good life lessons are shown in this
book. You can see how life can concave from one second to another, it
shows you how not to be a bystander in life, to cobble a
relationship, or too even make peace with your foe.
However the most important lesson of all is how to acolyte life
to it’s fullest, because on the other hand you never know how much time you
have left with the people you love.
This book will leave you insomniac. You’ll be so teathered
to it; that you won’t want to put it down. I recommend this book for
sixteen-year-old kids and up. It’s a little overwhelming even though its an impeccable
book. The story line is queued together, although if you be patented you’ll
end up loving it.