non fiction novel project may 2012 Little Bee

1.0-1.5 DEFINE:

1. Teather: a rope or chain that’s prevents an animal to move.

2. Placid: calm and peaceful

3.  Gouge: a chisel like tool with a cylindrical blade.

4.  Solemn: grave

5. Ogling: to look at in a flirty way.

6.  Asylum: a place where ill or people with needs go.

7.  Queue: braided hair worn hanging behind

8.  Impeccable: flawless, perfect

9.  Sorcerers: evil, supernatural powers

10. Cobbled: to mend, put back together

11. Smiting: to hit hard

12. Linoleum: hard, washable, floor covering

13. Foe: enemy or opponent

14. Acolytes: somebody following the celebration

15. Henchmen: Flunky, criminal

16. Recrimination: accusation in response to one from someone else

17. Insatiable:  appetite or desire, impossible to satisfy

18. Threshold:  Piece of wood or stone that you put under the door

19. Bystanders: A person who is present but not involved (passerby)

20. Insomniac: No sleep

21. Cipralex:  a drug used for depression

22. Fester: Unhealthy, decay

23. Bureaucracy: system of organization and administration

24. Concave: going inward

25. Solicitor: lawyer who addresses matters of law with clients

2.0

Pg. 91: In the mirror my green eyes were peaceful (placid).

Pg. 91: So I drilled (gouged) my thumb into the skin beneath my lashes.

Pg. 9:  This small plastic bag is what I was holding in my hand when the detention officer told me to go and stand in the tangled line (queue) for the telephone.

Pg. 9: One has to go through a very great number  of charity boxes, you will understand, to put together an outfit that is truly an (ensemble).

Pg. 21: My son and I lived with consequences- a houseful of celebrations (acolytes), criminals (henchmen) and stooges, flirting with (ogling) us from behind the sofa, cackling darkly in the thin gap beside the bookcase, and generally bursting out at us willy-nilly.

Pg. 24: He gave the vicar a dead (solemn) thumbs up.

Pg. 13: You are like evilly powerful (sorcerers) and you gave made your language as safe as money.

Pg. 18: The headline on the new page said: Ill (Asylum) Seekers Eating Our Swans.

Pg. 19: I heard his chair scrape on the hard (linoleum) floor.

Pg. 24: The amputation was flawless (impeccable).

Pg. 168: Shock, then accusations (recrimination), and then two years of Andrews deepening depression.

Pg. 170: Lawrence grinned, but then hesitated on the stop (threshold). 

Pg. 171: I think one of those innocent extra (bystanders) you see in the back round of the comics.

Pg. 172:  Andrew was wondering around the house on his can’t-go-to-sleep (insomniac) nights.

Pg. 172:  the only thing keeping my husband going was six Amaretto biscuits and one tablet of anti-depressant (Cipralex) a day.

Pg. 172:  I’ve spent two years denying what happened on that beach. Ignoring it, letting in infect (fester).

Pg. 173: You’ll get dragged down by the government (bureaucracy), and they’ll send her home away.

Pg. 175: The ramp (concave) of Lawrence’s back.

Pg. 176: I’ll need to find her a lawyer (solicitor), and start an appeal procedure.

Pg. 81: I had been chained (teathered) to the detention center for two years.

Pg. 23: I went to Nigeria in hope to mend (cobble) my marriage.

Pg. 21: If it wasn’t Mr. Freeze with his dastardly ice rays, the it was the Penguin-Batman’s enemy (foe).

Pg. 169: His lips wobbled and his face went red and he howled, abandoning himself utterly to grief in that way only infants and super heroes have-that way that knows misery is bottomless and unsatisfying (insatiable).

 2.5

Negative/ harmful:

·      Solemn

·      Teather

·      Asylum

·      Sorcerers

·      Smiting

·      Foe

·      Henchmen

·      Recrimination

·      Cipralex

·      Fester

·      Concave

Positive:

·      Placid

·      Ogling

·      Impeccable

·      Cobble

·       

Having to do with the law:

·      Henchmen

·      Recrimination

·      Bureaucracy

·      Solicitor

Tools

·      Teather

·      Placid

·      Gouge

·      Linoleum

·      Threshold

Medical:

·      Cipralex

·      Fester

·      Insomniac

Vanity/ Beauty:

·      Ogling

·      Queue

·      Impeccable

Amazon Book review: Ruff copy

Little Bee

This quarter we were assigned to read a non-fiction book. To honestly say I wasn’t too happy. I tend to stay away from non-fiction. But to my surprise I ended up really enjoying it. This book is anything from placid. It’s about an African girl named Little Bee. She is driven out of her festering country, by the sorcerers who control it.  She makes a journey to the impeccable country of England. Where she meets up with some old friends.

Surprisingly enough I did like this book. On a scale from one to ten I would honestly give it a seven.  Very good life lessons are shown in this book. You can see how life can concave from one second to another, it shows you how not to be a bystander in life, to cobble a relationship, or too even make peace with your foe. But the most important lesson of all is how to acolyte life to it’s fullest, because you never know how much time you have left with the people you love.

This book will leave you insomniac. You’ll be so teathered to it; that you won’t want to put it down. I recommend this book for sixteen-year-old kids and up. It’s a little overwhelming but its still an impeccable book. The story line is queued together, so you really have to have patience to understand it.

3.0

PARTNER: JULIANA LABORDE

1.0- check, all good

1.5- add more to your definitions. Don’t make them be just one word

2.0- fix punctuation, capitalization and spelling errors

2.5- perfect

3.0- try using transitional words to polish it up, I really liked your review you gave details but, you didn't give it away, also you had a really good use of the words and the paragraphs flowed nicely. You have some grammar mistakes but, over all your review is great.

Little Bee: IMPROVED

This quarter we were assigned to read a non-fiction book. To honestly say I wasn’t too happy. I tend to stay away from non-fiction. However I really ended up really enjoying it. This book is anything from placid. It’s about an African girl named Little Bee. She is driven out of her festering country, by the sorcerers who control it.  She makes a journey to the impeccable country of England. Where she meets up with some old friends.

Surprisingly enough I did like this book. On a scale from one to ten I would honestly give it a seven. Yet, very good life lessons are shown in this book. You can see how life can concave from one second to another, it shows you how not to be a bystander in life, to cobble a relationship, or too even make peace with your foe.

However the most important lesson of all is how to acolyte life to it’s fullest, because on the other hand you never know how much time you have left with the people you love.

This book will leave you insomniac. You’ll be so teathered to it; that you won’t want to put it down. I recommend this book for sixteen-year-old kids and up. It’s a little overwhelming even though its an impeccable book. The story line is queued together, although if you be patented you’ll end up loving it.